This is lovely, you. (It's always kind of bittersweet for me to read fic of yours that I haven't read before; on one hand, I wasn't part of it! Which makes me sad. But on the other hand, I get to read your stories completely fresh, which is awesome.)
Section three broke my heart a little, predictably, but it felt very real; I loved that they don't have one fight and that's the end of it, but that it's sort of the beginning of the end.
These are all so well-realized, but I especially loved the ending, too; the inclusion of the idea that Johnny can get mad at Stephane, but also that Stephane still can't keep his hands to himself. Lovely characterization all around.
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Date: Wednesday, 9 June 2010 20:54 (UTC)Section three broke my heart a little, predictably, but it felt very real; I loved that they don't have one fight and that's the end of it, but that it's sort of the beginning of the end.
These are all so well-realized, but I especially loved the ending, too; the inclusion of the idea that Johnny can get mad at Stephane, but also that Stephane still can't keep his hands to himself. Lovely characterization all around.