I'M GLAD WE HAVE A MUTUAL RECOGNITION OF GREATNESS GOING ON <3
I figured you were basically busy! I hope it is a happy sort of busy ♥ and I will definitely send you the new version! I hope you don't mind reading it all over because I kind of inserted a couple of new scenes in the middle, etc. Whatever works best, bb! ♥
Riiight? I mean yes, obviously he's a better writer so I think the engagingness of his female characters comes out way better than RTD's, which fell flat at times, but on the other hand... /o\ and also >>>>:(
(I mean I love River and I thought the whole 'I'm going shopping!' thing was pretty badass (lol 'take off all your clothes') but given what else we've seen of his female characters so far, the fact that 'I'm going shopping!' was written in - eh. dislike.)
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Date: Monday, 29 August 2011 02:03 (UTC)I figured you were basically busy! I hope it is a happy sort of busy ♥ and I will definitely send you the new version! I hope you don't mind reading it all over because I kind of inserted a couple of new scenes in the middle, etc. Whatever works best, bb! ♥
Riiight? I mean yes, obviously he's a better writer so I think the engagingness of his female characters comes out way better than RTD's, which fell flat at times, but on the other hand... /o\ and also >>>>:(
(I mean I love River and I thought the whole 'I'm going shopping!' thing was pretty badass (lol 'take off all your clothes') but given what else we've seen of his female characters so far, the fact that 'I'm going shopping!' was written in - eh. dislike.)