ext_19961 ([identity profile] nova33.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] extemporally 2010-06-09 08:54 pm (UTC)

This is lovely, you. (It's always kind of bittersweet for me to read fic of yours that I haven't read before; on one hand, I wasn't part of it! Which makes me sad. But on the other hand, I get to read your stories completely fresh, which is awesome.)

Section three broke my heart a little, predictably, but it felt very real; I loved that they don't have one fight and that's the end of it, but that it's sort of the beginning of the end.

These are all so well-realized, but I especially loved the ending, too; the inclusion of the idea that Johnny can get mad at Stephane, but also that Stephane still can't keep his hands to himself. Lovely characterization all around.

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