A ha ha ha this is why I suck at challenges! I always get all, "THIS CANNOT BE RUSHED" and end up not writing anything at all after procrastinating a good long while, which is a prime indicator of how much I suck as a human being. :D:

Ooh, beginnings. Usually mine sound pretty stiff because I haven't really figured out what kind of headspace the story needs yet! It gets easier as I write, until I hit a bump and then start sounding awkward.

Also, your icon is extremely distracting. That stupid t-shirt. His COLLARBONES, oh god.